Highway Rose: the broken thorn

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Part 4 of the 4 part series

Updated 08/29/2017
Created 09/21/2006
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A moonless night reflected two dark hearts
words seeped between them, like Cupid's harp
driving across the desert with cactus smiles
getting to know each other, driving for miles.

A motel gleamed in distant, dim, neon lights.
She thought of a hot shower to end this night.
He offered to pay if she desired to go,
agreed was a weary and dusty, Highway Rose.

They parked the car and entered the room
kisses were exchanged while love bloom.
She went for the shower and he went for her
in the rain's closet, Highway Rose purred.

Embraced in each other and naked of deceit
each tasting the other where life is sweet.
They fell into the wall grasping their desires
holding each other and churning lust's fires.

She found love in the Death Valley day's end
when the door burst open; the police stormed in.
Rose reached for her pistol as sounds explode,
like a broken thorn she fell, Highway Rose.

(the end)

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Highway Rose: a Bud bloom (part one)
Highway Rose: a rose's thorn (part two)
Highway Rose: call of the wild (part three)
Highway Rose: the broken thorn (part four)

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oregon_galoregon_galover 17 years ago
ahhhh....

and me still thinking of that poor naked bastard left on the hiway. you surprised me with the bloody ending! fun read.

oregon_galoregon_galover 17 years ago
ahhhh....

and me still thinking of that poor naked bastard left on the hiway. you surprised me with the bloody ending! fun read.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The saga's conclusion

With a sad and fitting end.