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My son slumps on the floor,
heavy as a sack of flour.
Only fingers move.

It as if worms
have eaten his body hollow
and the new moths
exit from his hands.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I work in a library

runescape has stolen our boys....I have set about to challenge them with dragon stuff ...trying to bring a creative side to the lads..you must find what they love and work it...wink...blue

WickedEveWickedEveover 17 years ago
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Excellent poem about something I'd never think to write about. lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
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I loved the phrase "heavy as a sack of flour" in reference to your son - or the narrator's son - as looking at my own son while playing his video game is truly reminiscent of this.

Wasn't this on the 30-30 thread today? So....how many days ago did you write this?? Ho ho! I've discovered your secret.

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