Landslide

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bluerains
bluerains
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Perhaps colors of quicksand skin
wrinkles dark shadows in seaswept winds,
covering wild tethered prey.

Rain may loosen
subterranean secrets
spilling on flesh wings,
as wind whistles
and love strays,
fluttering inside another albatross day,
but, I stiffen in shadows, loving your
ghost
this way.

bluerains
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oregon_galoregon_galover 17 years ago
swept away....!

in many ways.....thank you for the fine read today.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
mention

...mentioned on the thread; "New Poems Review"

thanks for the literary journey (~_~)

unapologeticunapologeticover 17 years ago
Whoa

If I could give this a 10, I would have: the scale simply doesn't go high enough for me to express my admiration. It has everything I look for in a poem - the imagery was fabulous, the words were well-chosen. I even read it out-loud, and the way it sounded was just as beautiful. It made me think of Elizabeth Bishop's style. I'm going to add it to my favorites as soon as I'm done writing this comment. Thank you so much for sharing it.

lobomaolobomaoover 17 years ago
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tossing trinkets into the fill

it is our hope to keep them down

the sullen swollen earth takes it all in

brooding to a time when whatever

casts out all our old memories

and dental records are our only identity

rain purges more than dirty creeky bed

look to it forward to start us again anew