My Sand Castle

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(dedicated with gratitude to Sheryl Tamplen)

Many, many waves have crashed
against my sand castle:
freezing waves of poverty,
waves of oppression,
patriotic waves of war,
grasping waves of greed,
malicious, mocking waves,
prideful waves of anger,
waves of perversion,
and lonely waves of shame.

But all have crashed in vain!!
And as they recede,
my cosmic castle expands and flourishes

But now,
a great Tsunami of insanity has risen above it!!

But it is my belief
that my castle shall survive with ease
for it is built of magic sands:
Peace, Courage, Comradery and Love

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 17 years ago
I like this castle, think I shall stay ~

I love the feeling here.

Yes, a bit of shoch but what is life without shock eh.

You paint a beautiful picture with a sound brush.

Think you dipped it in honey a bit there at the end.

Nice touch ~

More Please~

twelveoonetwelveooneover 17 years ago
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first one I've seen from you that dips into the stock images.

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionover 17 years ago
keep on truckin'

keep that positive attitude and things will always work out

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

A bit of magic

For that most fragile of constructs

A castle of sand filled with hope...

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