Erotic Love

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I want you to slowly undress me
I want to feel you touch me
To run your hands down my body
Down my sides, backward to my ass
Slowly moving up again over my tummy
Making your way to my breasts
Cupping them, running your fingers over my nipples
Feeling them harden like little pebbles

I want you to kiss me gently on my lips
Moving your mouth across my cheek,
Slowly planting butterfly kisses as you move over to my neck
I want you to kiss my neck, feel me shiver
Feel my nipples getting even harder
I want you to move your mouth across my throat
Planting butterfly kisses all the way
Moving downward – over my collar bone to my breasts
I want you to kiss each breast gently, softly
Taking each nipple between your lips, in your mouth
Running your tongue over each of them and biting them gently
Making me shiver with ecstasy, with longing

I want you to slowly move me towards the bed
To lay me down gently on my back
To come lay beside me
Look into my eyes as you run your hands over my body
From my face, to my throat, over my breasts, across my tummy
As I move my legs apart in sweet expectation
Your hands finding it’s destination between my legs
I want you to feel my wetness, my softness, my smoothness
I want you to slowly stroke my hot, wet pussy
Inserting your fingers, moving them out
Watching me as I close my eyes in pure pleasure, pure ecstasy
Hearing me moan from the pure pleasure of your fingers inside me,
Moving around, moving in and out
Hearing my breath catch as I’m about to explode
Kissing me as I moan with ecstasy into your mouth
Letting go….

I want you to move your mouth from mine
Making your way down over my tummy,
Taking my legs in your hands and spread them wide
Your mouth planting wet kisses over my inner thighs
I want you to taste my wetness,
Stimulate my clit with your tongue
Take my swollen clit in your mouth and gently suck on it
Hearing me moan as I arch my back with pure ecstasy once again
I want to feel your tongue deep inside my tight pussy as I squeeze it
Pulsating around your tongue as you lick and stroke me
Lapping up my sweet hot wetness
As I explode with your tongue inside me.

I want to take hold of your shoulders, moving you on your back
I want to straddle you and kiss you
I want to look into your eyes as I move my hands downwards
Cupping your hard, smooth cock in my hands
As I lean forward, looking deep into your eyes and kiss you
Tasting myself on your lips
My hands feeling your hardness but also your smooth softness
I want to move down and take your throbbing cock into my mouth
I want to hear you moan as I suck you
I want to feel you pulsate in my mouth
I want to feel you contract, letting go
I want to taste you; I want to taste all of you

I want to look up and see the sheer pleasure on your face
The sweet look of release
I want to move up, straddling you
Slowly moving downward on your hard cock
Taking you inside me
Feeling you sink inside me
Feeling the way my sensitive pussy expands to take you in
All of you
All of the way
I want you to feel the hotness
The wetness
The tightness
I want to just sit like that
With your cock so deep inside me
Lean over and kiss you
I want to feel your tongue in my mouth
I want to feel our tongues meet as
I slowly start moving up and down

Letting your cock glide out of my wet pussy ever so slowly and
Taking you in again, slowly, oh so slowly
I want to feel the friction of our joining
The way my pussy tightens around you
As we move together, making sweet, sweet love
As I look deep into your eyes
See your soul
See you – the real you

I want to close my eyes and arch my back as we move together
As we move faster, the pleasure building
Building…building
Until finally we fall over the edge together
Me on top of you
Moaning
Cumming
Cock throbbing
Pussy pulsating
Grabbing you
Milking you
Until finally we lay spent
Me on top of you
Our sweaty bodies pressed tight together
As the smell of our sex permeate our senses
Enveloping us in a blissful cocoon of love and erotica.

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2275jr2275jrover 15 years ago
so very erotic and sexy

The maiden that wants to give and take it all fantastic

lovely so full of the whole body.great writing

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Welcome to the poetry side of Lit

With your first submission.

Two quick observations ~

You need to ruthlessly edit and pare this down; way too long for what you're describing.

Related is the second point; as I was reading I felt it's loaded with too many run-on sentences. Puctuation would help.

Think of it this way - the fewer words you use, the greater the impact of those words that you do use.

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