- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Addicted
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Click hereI can feel you in me all the time
You’re in my thoughts
Under my skin
Inside of me
I can taste you on my tongue
I close my eyes and I see your face
Even awake I day dream of you
You saturate me
A gentle breeze is your breath on my neck
Leaves’ rustling is you whispering in my ear
The warm sun on my body is your caresses
Everything reminds me of you
I’m addicted to you and I need another fix
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 17 years agoCould not have described the feeling better myself...The morning dew, pervasive on the lawn, my mouth tasting.
LeBrozover 17 years agoNicely done but here are a couple small suggestions:
Don't say day dream, just dream; it makes the line more powerful;
"Even awake I dream of you"
Rather than caresses, make it singular,
"The warm sun on my body is your caress"
A colorful way of saying everything reminds me of you.
duddle146over 17 years agoLovely nature's metaphors highlight this beautiful rendering. Another version of 'You complete me.' Well Crafted.
