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Click hereSlipping in between the sheets
Where your warmness I desire to meet
Your hot hard nakedness
Awaits my quaking wetness
I am closer to you
Only desiring to make you quiver too
Deep inside my soul
Loving you will make me whole
To feel your need
and taste your body's seed
Hold me, touch me slow, kiss me there
Make me shiver with your mouth everywhere
Liquid fire burns in my womanhood
Damn no one said it would be this good
Deep and deeper
Harder and Harder
Take me to that higher plain
Where our love will burst into flames
Thrust into me like you are dying
Faster and faster there is no more denying
I want you to take me and do whatever you want too.
You've piqued my interest...I wanted to read more, but then you may have to put it in the erotic category. Very good.
My biggest objection is to the shortage of punctuation;
Try semicolons, periods, or even break it into at least a couple of stanzas. Would make the reader's job much easier, instead of trying to figure out how you meant for it to be.