- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Parts
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If I added up all the parts of you
The individual items like a check off list
Your eyes, your shape, your voice
Your smile, your inches in height and breath and
Circumference
Of parts protruding
Or sculpted
There would not be a total of
Complete
That would measure up
They would all fall short
And yet
It's the complete of you
Spirited by the warm of your
Heart and soulful
Tender gaze and
Empathy
Rising from a well of depth
That rates the 10 I see
Not that I'm keeping score
Just that it is the you'ness that
Rates complete on every level
Not the parts that show
But your blinding self that truly IS
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREover 17 years agoI would call it anti parts and if I wanted to scare some readers which you in your wisdom did not I would add the ideal of the wholeness Or as you put it The “you-ness” of you After all Plato ask what is it that “chair-ness” quality that make it into a chair? Then went over all kinds of parts to find that none was enough or sufficient to describe the you-ness of the chair. So The Ideal of you it is! At least for me. One thing I can tell you right now. Great as I feel that this poem is, you won’t go with it to any corporation and get any money from them as an idea for say a commercial for any product. It’s simple! They are all about… EXACTLY… divide and control (in a manner of speaking) - PARTS! Product which will enhance each and every part of us and thus will make our empty whole complete. For them these will be hearsay! Wait, they may offer you money to not advertise it! But it’s too late the secret is out! Women love our wholeness!(we still have to work on our appearance) And coming to think of it , those that we stick with are not those with one or five parts that are particularly nice. Ok, time to throw all the commercials away! Yea...sure!
Fun and inspiring work.
Amyfriendover 17 years agoSpirited by the warm of your
Heart and soulful
Tender gaze and Empathy
``
Perfection in her eyes.
LeBrozover 17 years agoA late arrival on today's scene where here,
The whole is greater than the sum of its parts {but said so much better here than that rather dry description}.
