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Dead leaves in the maelstrom
Tossed around in the blustery gale
Lost to your whims
Never in control
Powerless
In your thrall
Emptiness
Reigns
- COMMENTS
epiphany65almost 16 years agoI liked this a lot, but it took me a few listens to really get it because I was taken by the sound of your voice. It's sexy. I wish you would do an audio story; it would be a hit.
BOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years agoWow, so sad. This poem could be about so many daughters writing about their fathers or boyfriends or lovers.
It is amazing how so few words can create so many images.
Thanks
wildsweetoneabout 17 years agoI mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. Please feel free to come along and join in with other Poets.
wildsweetone
