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bluerains
bluerains
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Mind flowing through tavern tunes,
heart sighs in dancing quivers
remembering how the lyrics were shattered.
Tunes twisting in time taken singing her sin; as
if seeking her soul in sound could conjure
vibrations of her static serenade.
His whirlpool eyes waltz into the ghost from his
pocket as he strokes her faded photo.
Such a potent melody lets her live inside his
memory, for they had danced the consequences
of love.

bluerains
bluerains
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Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 17 years ago
^

Loved

'for they had danced the consequences

of love.'

Very nice.

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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Potent thoughts of memory as an old love lives on; having the real love would be so much better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Someone said, "Classic blue"

It is. You always manage to slip some reference to water. I like this poem very much. Thank you.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 17 years ago
classic blue

I always thought of the ticking of the clock was the word 'snap' said every second... to awaken us every moment yet; we tend to ignore the ticking after awhile <grin I enjoyed your poem (~_~)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I like this :)

Thanks for sharing! :)

-Curiouswife

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