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I would undo time
and undo the unpretty thing(s) I did.
You still wouldn't understand.
You would still feel unappreciated.
You cannot unforget the good things,
But damn are you good at unforgiveness.
I unlive an unlife
where I watch you come back to me in reverse.
You have become unddicted to me.
- COMMENTS
SoftlyWhisperalmost 17 years agoUndying in it's form and undeniably artistic in it's feel. This poem hits hard to the core of the very being of all who read it. I detect such sadness and torment from the writer but always with just a hint of hope...awesome write.
skittles_lmabout 17 years agocouldn't resist that one... nice flow here. The end of the first stanza seemed a little...convoluted? But still a deeper read than it appears at a single glance. Well done, as usual.
wildsweetoneabout 17 years agoI mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review Thread in the Poetry Forum.
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