- Erotic Poetry
- Untitled: Poem # 309
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her ass reddened
by love’s bruising torrent
for tasting sweet nectar
of another
singing of pain
burning cooled only by
my tongue
kissing upon her blazing
naked skin
honey petal wet
begging for the hardness
of my manhood
to kiss her hot sugar walls
- COMMENTS
LeBrozalmost 17 years agoNice simple clean piece. Just a small suggestion for you to consider for the ending. Try changing:<P>
<Br>begging for the hardness
<Br>of my manhood
<Br>to kiss her hot sugar walls<P>
to:<P>
<Br>begging for my hardness
<Br>to kiss her hot sugar walls.
Angelinealmost 17 years agoYou poem has been recommended in the "New Poems" thread at the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!
