- Non-Erotic Poetry
- I give you my heart
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Now I know what caused the pain,
Like I was torn in two,
It simply came from ripping out
My heart to give to you.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 16 years agoI loooove it!!!! i can't think of a better way to say it. beautiful. soooo putting this one on my favs!!! --SQ
champagne1982almost 17 years agoa catchy rhythm tangled with a universal idea.
I really hope you tackle a few more sophisticated forms in the future. Try to stop relying heavily on cliched ideas to develop your themes, though. Doing so turns your talent into white bread, middle America boredom and you have too much to waste in that direction.
Thanks for sharing.
