- Non-Erotic Poetry
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Dreams lost and found in the hush
of late night musings
riot of color from
moon and water on wall
splash my world with
kaleidoscope fancies
Hand on stomach takes
me away from my wandering
back to the here and now
of body heat shared
and breath mingled
in the oldest dance on earth
Light in the darkness
pierces my soul with
radiant amber glow
my sigh swallowed by
her mouth as she breathes
and I breathe with her
Pillow talk at 4am
and we should have been
asleep hours ago but
nothing is more important
than these quiet murmurs
from whisper to whisper
In the end words are
unnecessary and trivial
compared to the heady
sensation of being two
made one and whole for
the first time as hearts
slow and sweat dries
5-29-07
- COMMENTS
unapologeticalmost 17 years agohttp://forum.literotica.com:81/showthread.php?p=22863752#post22863752
normal jeanalmost 17 years agoI really was touched by this poem. Sometimes, a first encounter, when written about, comes out sounding corny and adolescent, but you did a fine job here!!
A couple of things, if you are interested in feedback--( beyond the first sentence I wrote)
In Stanza 3, line 2, if you drop the "with" down to the next line, it sounds better, flows better. You have done a good job with this one, it just needs some minor tweaking.
I will look for your work again :)
NJ
