Blue Liquorice

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bluerains
bluerains
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mouth trails smooth
textures of sweetened sinews

night nature’s freedom
dripping down drumming throats

serene thoughts sacrificed
spell spiced

fluidity spills its worship

his tongue
her savior
her body
his shrine
a dyad of
divine deliverance
sugar crystal spread

bluerains
bluerains
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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
A NEW TYPE OF JOY JELL

its better than honey and alum, TK U MLJ LV NV

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 17 years ago
^

Very nice, really liked the line

'fluidity spills its worship.'

It is a little hard to read aloud (least for me) but I really like the image it creates.

wildsweetonewildsweetonealmost 17 years ago
poetry forum

i mentioned this poem in the new poem review thread in the Poetry Forum - wildsweetone

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