Spilled Erotic, measure

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bluerains
bluerains
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She’ll dip you in her bottle of sin,
twirling its potion to spilled erotic,
measure up your lengthy straw,
bend tip to rim
and then,
sip slowly.

bluerains
bluerains
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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 16 years ago
^

This is so good it... 'sips slowly.'

manipulatrixmanipulatrixover 16 years ago
nice

like your use of line and rhythm ... seems to both slow down and speed up ... which seems right.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 16 years ago
Wicked -

- and sly. I found myself smiling as I read this one. I like it, blue.

Tess

wildsweetonewildsweetoneover 16 years ago
poetry forum

i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temperature rating i've given you is so that it does not affect future temp ratings. - wildsweetone.

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