Cobweb Blues

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Paper waits for pen.
Pen waits for hand.
Hand waits for brain.
Brain waits for inspiration.
Inspiration waits on tables

at a truck stop.

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normal jeannormal jeanover 14 years ago
terrific!

it's short....and brilliant! and sad, but true, said very well. ;)

I enjoy your work, ~ NJ

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesabout 16 years ago
Inspiration

comes from a mulitude of places,

and thus, even the waitress at

the truck stop.

I loved your quick witt and word play,

and wrapping it up so neatly

in very short lines...

If I were the waitress,

you could nearly bet, there

would be scribbles on the back of my

order pad, I love you's, and IOU's..

clever, very clever ~

With firm peaches and a smile-

sGp

jomarjomarover 16 years ago
Or bartends

Very nicely done.

bluerainsbluerainsover 16 years ago
the title

grabbed my attention and the short images were tight and direct...nice senryu

blue

twelveoonetwelveooneover 16 years ago
Gee, Bill

On the road! Reminds me of a Kerouc haiku, his better ones.

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