- Erotic Poetry
- Your Back
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Click hereIt’s the strong draw of the shallow,
ridged hollow that wanders
down the center
of your back, leading me
to mount the smooth,
double mounds which tightly
press against one another,
making a seam
I long to part.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 16 years agocan sometimes be a benefit. I read this once this morning, and again just now. Of course, the impact was stronger the first time because the words led me along until the nice little oomph end. Is it poetry or prose or a mix? I don't really care. It created an effect - a pleasurable effect - when I read it.
DeepAsleepover 16 years agoThis poem has been mentioned in the New Poems Reviews thread of the Literotica Poetry Feedback and Discussion message board.
