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SunrockSin
SunrockSin
184 Followers

 

      the end
before
  dies just as
the favorite character
does (not)
      begin again
    story
short – too short

 


SunrockSin
SunrockSin
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ishtatishtatabout 16 years ago
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Poems like this make me feel some part of my brain is mising because I don't somehow feel intellectually or emotionally engaged at all. So this is a comment where I don't think I can say much. I'll read it again tomorrow.

AngelineAngelineabout 16 years ago
I really like this!

The form and content work really well together. You managed to say a lot with very few words.

WickedEveWickedEveabout 16 years ago
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Mentioned on the new poems thread. :)

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