- Non-Erotic Poetry
- A lips seduction
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Two plums hang nectared sweet
juice sucking
globes of perfection,
exquisite symmetry
begging touch,
breathing succulent aroma.
Each one a lips
seduction.
- COMMENTS
swallowedscreamabout 16 years agoMade them sound so inviting,I almost wanted to taste those plums myself-which are generally not my fruit of choice *wink* great read, thanks! :D
WomanPariahabout 16 years agoThere is succulent imagery, and a tasty bounce to this piece, I really like it. I have a bit of a problem with the plums sucking juice and breathing aroma, though. That is, if I'm reading this right and the plums are breasts. If they are NOT breasts, then I'm more confused than usual, but this is still a nicely re-readable work. Thanks for the read.
LeBrozabout 16 years agoI prefer that my plums ripen and remain untouched while I savor another sort of fruit......
sweet GA peachesabout 16 years agoWith Angeline, uh-huh, plums .. yep..
pouty plump seduction, very clever-
very clever word play..
I like, I like it alot !
sGp
Angelineabout 16 years agoWho said this is about plums? I think if you shifted the line breaks a bit--and specially if you got "sucking globes of perfection" on one line, there would be no question as to subject! ;)
