Trip We Are On

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bluerains
bluerains
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From first moment her wildflower beauty fetched his
gypsy moth heart fluttering in transitory
cocoon shift,
she became the idea of his transformation
so his wings might draw sustenace from her singularity,
integrating instincts. by bluedolphin®

bluerains
bluerains
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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 15 years ago
^

The first three lines, you come out floating like a butterfly and stinging like a bee. The fourth line is a beautiful transition to just floating. I wish I could write like this.

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 16 years ago
this really does ....

flow very nice, it especially does in the first few lines. that's something i've yet to accomplish ....don

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
dupe or no

goodness nourishes and delights again and again. I am in awe at how this beauty seems to pour out of you, like a stream from a source eternal. This one, the dupe before and anything you release here or anywhere.

bluerainsbluerainsabout 16 years agoAuthor
duplicated

Sorry this is a dup....the format said I had to change name but, was already

approved ..∑Blue