Broken Wings

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secretme
secretme
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Beautiful view
up or down
the distance
tower windows
view the expanse
the world
yours and mine
the only way out
one step
if only flying
as simple as breathing
or not
lost and found in one breath

slowly
it happened so slowly
placed happily on a pedestal
I never noticed
as each feather fell
to subtle plucking
until bare
bleeding
broken
there’s no way down
but falling

secretme
secretme
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
nice.. lovely imagery and truth. i smile.

Poetry is more than words or grammer.

Why use new lines to imply glamour?

natural is, natural does.

no need for is or were or was.

Lovely images deftly painted,

Stylist bound, slightly tainted.