Penny for Your Thoughts

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Sometimes
When you want to know what I’m thinking
I say, “Not much.”
And spew bullshit because what I am thinking is
I want to rip you in twitching hallowed pieces
I want to devour your fear and everything you hide
Tear you open
Lick your heart
Swallow you.
If you knew how hungry I was
Would you come closer?

There are two words
That I have dreamt of night and day
Since the moment I saw you
Nervous
Hiding:
Hurt me.
You said it with your eyes
With your cunt
And I answered
And I wait.

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bluebellbluebellabout 16 years ago
Vivid

Brilliantly disturbing. I read it, sat a minute, did a double-take, and read it again (and again). There's a soft violence to the emotion of this piece. I enjoyed it immensely.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 16 years ago
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my tuppence, I like it, but sharpen it. Towards the end it becomes a little dull.

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 16 years ago
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Phewwwwww my thought are now worth more than a penny!