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SunrockSin
SunrockSin
184 Followers

 

The day would come – we saw it
and now pondering the verse
carved into your damp granite
I will remember the curse,

how we dared color gray rows
of the trudging, endless lines
marching in near mindless prose
with a bit of rhythm, rhyme.

We broke their lines, set words free,
blued their skies with metaphor
though they called us bourgeoisie
it was we who searched for more.

Suddenly now I’m the last
with nothing better to do
than spend my day in the past
discussing poems with you.

 

SunrockSin
SunrockSin
184 Followers
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WickedEveWickedEveabout 16 years ago
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Good poem. Nice to read one where the rhyme works.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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With such a softly rhyming structure and an unusual title, it feels directed to poets in general, than to one in particular, despite its obvious focus.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 16 years ago
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as verse, you could do much worse, but yes I kind of like it

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