- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Stormy Weather
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Click hereDiamond-hoofed dancers descend
From cotton candy clouds
Assuming a delicate stance
They dazzle the earth that lies below
Their movement fluid, passionate flourishes
Pirouettes propelled by whipping wind
At once gentle and brute
The elements tango in tandem
No rehearsals, just improvisation…the moment
Lightning dances the rumba
To boom-bastic claps of thunder
Played in surround sound
Winding down, a hush befalls the air
Leaves settle, like bumble bee kisses, on flowers
Golden rays clear a path through the crowd
The closing number is a rainbow
- COMMENTS
bisexualsmokerover 15 years agoThis is a nice poem.Natures poetry.
With these words I can see the storm
with my eyes closed,and hear it as well.
It's a very elegant poem.
JaneAustenalmost 16 years agoThis piece pleases the senses and is visually appealing. Also, your use of alliteration and consonance do not unnoticed by this reader. Enjoyable! ~JaneAusten
Anschulalmost 16 years agoJust this morning, I was thinking of an old tune, and here you come, with this little gem. Excellent.
champagne1982almost 16 years agoI really enjoyed your metaphor and well, boom-bastic is just a great rythmic word. This poem is mentioned on the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.
