- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Knees (08/08)
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There are no shadows
in expensive hotel rooms.
No dark corners, or cracks
where you can sink your soul,
no threadbare carpets
that will skin your knees.
Even the ceilings are cleared
of cobwebs, skimmed
of conscience and decision.
Discussion is minimal, sometimes.
The walls though are thin
and a moan might need muffling,
as needs need fulfilling.
- COMMENTS
Bill Dadaover 15 years agoAn amazing description of a cold and empty room and by implication alone, how intense the needs are that need fulfilling. I liked this one alot.
normal jeanover 15 years agoIt seems sort of cold and empty, ( the room, not the poem). I could imagine the room as an entity, having its own "feelings" whatever a room might feel though, I have no clue.
It made me imagine what all has gone on in there, cheap rooms and expensive ones, alike. I enjoyed the read and where it took me.
NJ
