- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Clingstone
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Click hereClingstone plum! I shouted
into the air and he turned, aware
of his new label.
"So I am no longer a snake
but a clingstone plum?"
Your flesh,
the better part of you, clings
to the pit.
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copyright d. dixon
2.29.08
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- COMMENTS
Angelineover 15 years agoThis poem seems to be a part of the crow poem to me, like an extension of the same idea. Like I said in the review, you could replace "snake" with "crow" in Clingstone, and this poem could be the second strophe of the crow poem. Either way it's very good though I think you could pare down that second strophe "So I am no longer..." maybe to "So I'm no longer..." Just a thought. Your poems make me think.
Safe_Betover 15 years agoNow this one I REALLY like. Perfect imagery! Loved the visualizations I get of the plum's soft flesh on the hard pit. Stellar!
