- Non-Erotic Poetry
- I look for You
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Click hereI look for you, and there you are
In the furthest reaches of mind
Almost hidden, almost in view.
I can feel your presence
Yet I cannot see you.
My mind reaches out, touches you
In the way my hands cannot.
I long to hold your face in my hands
To whisper ‘I cannot breath without you.’
My mind screams
Craving your presence.
My heart calls softly
With a gentle tone.
I wait without patience
Listening for the sound of your Soul meeting mine
Still, we remain entwined in dance,
Apart,
Yet not.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 15 years agoThis poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.<br>
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WickedEveover 15 years agobreath/breathe you're/your seem to trip writers up often. :) Nice poem; keep writing, shy slave.
Safe_Betover 15 years agoEspecially liked how you ended. Nice. Your Master would be so proud of you!
lindianaover 15 years ago...a wonderful work even though you have breathe spelled wrong...
Other than that, a great job
