- Erotic Poetry
- The Awakening
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Subdued for years
my pupils blast with glee
garnishing your grin
of hinted intention.
A drama would suit us both well
so edge forward
feign friendship
let us begin.
I’ve got that giddy
topsy-turvy
twist in my tummy
and a boiling bubble for veins.
Shoot into me
some quick wit
and come, see
how my smile opens wide.
- COMMENTS
unpredictablebijouover 15 years agoit really brings out the "drugged" feeling of that first flush of excitement at flirtation and new connections. Nicely done!
WickedEveover 15 years agoThe entire poem is a perfect description. And this part is sensational: Subdued for years my pupils blast with glee
champagne1982over 15 years agoThis is a poem that illustrates the whole gamut of meeting someone new and does it very well. You've made me want a bit of infatuation ... This poem is mentioned on the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum.
Safe_Betover 15 years agoVery well written. I especially liked the second stanza.
"A drama would suit us both well
so edge forward
feign friendship
let us begin."
Wonderfully cheerful sarcasm. I love it!
