- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Dreams of Payback
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Click hereRaped
worth nothing
thrown out like trash
Shame
self loathing
must be my fault
Hate
just revenge
die you mother fucker
Justice
fulfilled desire
Silent Scream of Rage
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 15 years agoThough it is a sensitive subject, I think you accurately expressed some of the feelings associated with rape. This poem is mentioned in today's New Poem Review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion Forum. Thanks for the read!
WickedEveover 15 years agoInstead of telling readers your emotions, like "I'm sad. I'm angry." show them. Show your readers by using concrete imagery. Give them details. Show anger, for example, by writing about how you threw a figurine against the wall and broke it. Maybe it was a gift from someone who hurt you. This shows the reader that you're angry and hurt.
