No lucky digit, no Kerouac

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She is not the apple,
and she is not the stem.
She is the dashed umber curl of leaf
managed to grow up out of the core,
clutching at it. Grotesque strand.
Crumpled thumb
spit out for a hitchhike.

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PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersover 11 years ago
Holy cow.

How did I miss this? Love spit out for a hitchhike. I don't so much like the uneasy transition between lines 3 and 4 but I see why you did that. Reading more of your work now.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
^

For me, when a poem really works, I have nothing to say...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Reach for the light. It is still a big world.

Yer mind, Blue, is illuminated. I lost myself in those lines a reflective while. From dirt grows the sweetest rose. I love you(I think someone slipped me an e)MANCELT.

jomarjomarover 15 years ago
Succint and tight

Well done, you!

lorencinolorencinoover 15 years ago
heroic ordinariness

<br>In a culture gone made with bigger and better, this expression of dogged indifference to the star-system is to be hailed and celebrated.

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