Fixed Wing

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bluerains
bluerains
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For heaven to know the all of "me",
butterfly and dragonfly, ill-fated, "I" be,
flying half winged in your apple tree.

Blossoms to fruit in seeded time,
down cidered sipped roots "I" shall decline
enjoined in harmony chakra blind,
fidelity, rivalry risen.

bluerains
bluerains
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lobomaolobomaoover 15 years ago
) blessed be

such rich shroudy songs you spin

always I love the reading

savoring them on my lips

As suculent winter fruit

deliciuos delightful delerious

just the way I like you :)

KillerRomanceKillerRomanceover 15 years ago
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I have to admit it took me a while to decipher the meaning behind the poem. When I did, I went "Ohhh." It was a lovely read, thank you. <3 Lillian, KR.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice Metaphor

This poem is mentioned in today's New Poem Review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum. Thanks for the read.

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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This is lovely little poem -- once "I" mentally removed the quotation marks.