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Click hereSnap, crackle, pop
sound of fat crisping
on a fire of glucose logs
made from our children
colored bowls of tasty toxins
fruity poison Pebble Puffs
served by harried moms to
future hyperglycemics
multi-colored rows of sugary greed
merrily perched at child eye level
Like smiling Captains and Toucans
patiently awaiting their prey
sweet death courtesy of
Kellogg’s of Battlecreek
Trigger 37 (poem about shopping for breakfast cereals.) / Poet's Choice
I went through sheer HELL with my girls about that sugary crap. Never, never would I buy Pebbles, and they would scream... okay, I loved your poem, it sent me back, ya know, my kids are grown. Keep up the good work :)
IN particular, since the first part was sorry as far as FB goes, your word choices are good, I loved the similar sounds, you did a good job, hell, a great job with your imagery.
~m