- Erotic Poetry
- Tata Man Dicks!
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Click hereTis past the time for us to rebel
And send our foes a fond farewell
To guide their women upon their backs
And teach the joy of lesbian counter-attacks
Marching against the centuries of male domination
Armies of lesbians will now show their fearsome might
No man shall prevail against their Sapphoric delight
Desperate for equality from those humans called "Mister"
In courts and in public we now challenge their rule
Cunnilingus has subverted the love of their sister
Knowing what they need is our most powerful tool
Soon every chick will want a woman to love and to fist her!
Trigger # 29 (includes the phrase "lesbian counter-attacks")/Poets Choice
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 15 years agoShouldn't it be Sapphic? I dunno.If you considered dropping a syllable or 3 in the first couple of lines it might read a little better, but good fun
annaswirlsabout 15 years agoHi! Your poem has been mentioned in today's New Poem Reviews: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.p hp?t=254157&page=129
Angelineabout 15 years agoIt has all the oomph and energy of a Souza march, which works well with the theme. I see places where you can edit it down some, and one line(the third)is not so clear to me--I think you're trying to pack too much info into those few words. But those are nitpicks and easily fixable: the theme and tone are perfect. :D xo, S.
