- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Moving On
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Click herethe emptiness of the room expands its dimensions
to such a point it is difficult to believe
we lived here so cramped
your mother's incessant cleaning could not prevent
the ashen shadows of the furniture
staining the walls like victims of a nuclear blast
our chatter, bickering and laughter
has been absorbed into the fabric of this house
and will haunt those people that come after us
as I stand in the void that was our life
I feel the drag refusing to let this era end
and long to be consumed in its passing
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 13 years agoI don't know if you read comments on old stuff, this is great,to the point of I can't say what stanza, I like best. A5
Anonymousabout 15 years agogood to see you here!
Like this image :absorbed into the fabric of this house:
Maria2394about 15 years agoI think that the first and last verses could stand as a poem, but 3 and 2 say so much. I will enjoy this poem many more times.
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