Dreams in Water

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miss_trust
miss_trust
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Strung up in lights
All heat and fingers
Sheets mean you’re here
But no flesh beside me
Hard to breathe in
Like a party underwater
Heart dancing, sidestep your messy hair
The bone makes it hard
Flesh makes it soft
Your eyes expand 45%
When you see something pretty
Yours are huge but
I don’t trust your compliment
Just love me
Under cotton threads, in the dark
Where dreams sigh like you and me
Where our hearts touch
And I can breathe underwater

miss_trust
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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
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I love the 'and I can breathe underwater.'

bluebellbluebellabout 15 years ago
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Your mind is an interesting place, my girl. This poem is a good read, and I thank you for sharing it. It was mentioned in Saturday's New Poem Reviews if you want to check it out. :)

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