A Curse of Old Beauty

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Marione
Marione
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Sliding through with graceful facile,
spare fingers through locks to covet.
Atop a terrible beauty they glide
and indulge in the luxury.
Akin to the whalebones in her bodice
they are annealed and whittled,
as the torque that decorates
her ivory clavicle, in sacrifice
to complement her loveliness.

(Her silhouette is soft perfection,
her waist perfect for two hands
to grip. And slide down,
and down).

With willed nonchalance,
nimble fingers fall mum
to the nil cockled petticoat
gathered hardly
'tween limbs of radiant pale.
She knows what lay
entwined like thorns come nadir.
In snarls and masses now,
they hiss at teeth of the comb.

(Heat pulses through her,
the steady, wet beat
of a palpitating heart.

It sears beneath her gown
to burn
at the apex of her luscious thighs).

Arrear to her allure,
thus such great beauty
at no time holds whole truth.
At high, she is guised splendid;
Lo below her feet carry
hose upon stocking evermore.

(Pointed toes strain and flex,
muscles clench.
Curved calves, smooth
and firm, wrap
around her lover).

A curse upon flesh
she knowingly accepts.
The happenings of striking elegance;
terrible a scar.
Fallen from simple-ness,
under the hex of vain affections,
a zealous martyr to pulchritude.

(Between the sheets
of her bed and gown,
her screams are divine.
She sings her own song).

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
OLDNESS IS NOT GODS DOMAIN

it is the forebearers genes. TK U MLJ LV NV

bluebellbluebellabout 15 years ago
Potential here

I do agree with bflagsst about the vocabulary, but I think what this poem showcases overall is that you do have discernible talent. A way with words. Palpable potential. Please continue with your work! This poem was mentioned in today's New Poem Recommendations on the Poetry Feedback forum, so feel free to drop in and take a look. Thank you for sharing.

bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
it bums me out when people say

'Oh, I'm not a poet, just trying it out.' It just makes me think, maybe I shouldn't read this persons work because obviously they don't think it's very good because they've qualified it with that silly warning. There's only a couple words that the average reader might not understand, all in the first stanza--but I can tell you write prose because you overdid it with the thesaurii. I liked a lot of the poem, I just think you could of written it better and simpler ala a 'beauty' in place of a 'pulchritude'...