- Erotic Poetry
- Jack and Jill Rewrite
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Jack and Jill went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water
Jack fell down and broke his crown
And Jill came tumbling after
Original Mother Goose Song above
My Reimagined verison of the song below
Jack and Jill went up the hill
Must have been something kinda kinky in that water
'Cause next they knew
Jack fell down complaining of balls so blue
Beggin' Jill to on his grind hers all around
The next day just to be safe
After their hot and heavy lay
Jill took that little pill marked just for the morning after
2009 Ramona Thompson
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