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Click hereSo many falling leaves,
each drifts a little before touching the ground.
She sits, fractured, on the curb.
Some many lessons; why none learnt?
'some many' or 'so many' ?
Latter reads better in my opinion.
Nice images
Not too crazy about the last line but I really like the way the poem drifts from leaves to "She sits, fractured, on the curb." That's a great line.