Autumn Lessons

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vrosej10
vrosej10
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So many falling leaves,

each drifts a little before touching the ground.

She sits, fractured, on the curb.

Some many lessons; why none learnt?

vrosej10
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whisperingsubmissionwhisperingsubmissionover 14 years ago
equally good

You're a good writer i like your use of imagery :)

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
Last line

'some many' or 'so many' ?

Latter reads better in my opinion.

Nice images

WickedEveWickedEveover 14 years ago
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Not too crazy about the last line but I really like the way the poem drifts from leaves to "She sits, fractured, on the curb." That's a great line.