Id and Ego Try to Trick Super Ego.

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Let's find pretty women, the three of us,
After dark on the beach at Fort Lauderdale
But leave your prayer rope behind for a day.

Reproach tomorrow. Good men and women
Learn from such as we have learned from you,

Like John the Baptist found honey as sweet
In the desert and really ate locusts,

But Pharaohs before him got laid in the sand
As did their minions by the Red Sea.

Yes, we know, the one that Moses parted.

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vrosej10vrosej10almost 15 years ago
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I like the way you've carried the biblical theme. I found this poem hilarious. Good work. What I expect from you.

DreamyLeerDreamyLeeralmost 15 years ago
ten dollar title anyway

Let's find pretty women

after dark on the beach at Fort Lauderdale

But leave your prayer (beads) behind for (the) day.

Reproach tomorrow. (<--replace) [Good men and women

Learn from such as we have learned from you, ] <---reword bracketed

Like John the Baptist found honey as sweet

In the desert and really ate locusts, (cute.)

But Pharaohs before him got laid in the sand

As did their minions by the Red Sea. <---reword this line