swells

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bluerains
bluerains
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sometimes
we collide
in time tipped swells
flood swift carried
three times never
lucky strike lit
volcano ruptured

bluerains
bluerains
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quietpoetquietpoetover 14 years ago
It flows through the dimensions

This is excellent... Believe it or not, it reminds me of walking through walls (or at least trying)...

QP

vrosej10vrosej10over 14 years ago
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Cryptic and economical. Just the way I like it.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
^

Cool word choices and cool rhythms, the words danced as they came out of my mouth.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
Nice connection of images

Compelling, but also vague/abstract.

bflagsstbflagsstover 14 years ago
fiver-roo

I actually love this poem on first read. Not sure what it's about yet.

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