Sounds of the Night

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_Lynn_
_Lynn_
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Deep growls, consent
I want to swallow them
The sounds of night outside my window
Sounds but not words
Hearing his words

The fresh night air filters in
Cooling my thoughts
Sending chills along my spine
Feeling his breath on my skin
Imaginary breath

Darkness fills my room
It wants to swallow me up
No whispers in the dark
The night took away the sounds
I miss the sound of your voice

_Lynn_
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Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoover 13 years ago
I did

not know you posted this and am glad I caught it. I find in nice, simply stated with a good contrast between the meaning of similar lines. You must look at it to see the structure carefully to catch the wordplay. BTW, did I ever tell you thank you?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Great work! VQ4U

DG HearDG Hearover 13 years ago
Sincere

One thing I always notice is that your poetry always seem to come from the heart. They always seem to have a deep and special meaning.

Well done and with high Respect

DG Hear

YoursSINSerelyYoursSINSerelyover 13 years ago
Reading in between the lines

I sensed more than two people in that room. Full of emotion, Lynn. Well done.