Sexual Predator Preys

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(Flash Fiction) Phil and Phyl Collide.
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The white cargo van, dinged and dented by ten years of service, slowly eased into the mega-apartment parking lot and parked in a poorly lit space, which strategically provided a view of the apartment fronts and parking spaces. At 10 PM, the night clouds had begun their descent to earth and most people were inside for the night.

In his late thirties, the driver was still handsome but as shop worn as his van. The last jail description put him at 6 feet tall and 238 lbs., brown hair and brown eyes. Phil wore his hair in a flat top, crew cut. His career as an itinerant auto mechanic demanded that he be physically fit. After parking, Phil rolled down the van windows and sat on a lawn chair the cargo area and fired up a cigarette.

He had followed her several times and knew that she would soon come home from her job as afternoon shift, store manager. She was beautiful to him, the type of classy girl who did not go for greasy mechanics, even when they were cleaned up. He guessed she was 22 to 24. She was tall, about 5' 8" and normal weight; not athletic but not flabby, either. She wore her long brown hair straight past the middle of her back. He did not know her name. He never knew their names, unless he read about them in the newspaper later.

His mind had constructed lots of scenes with her. What she would look like with her long straight hair just barely covering her breasts. What those breasts would look like and feel like as his hands squeezed. What those long legs would look like if she wore only a black bikini bottom. How soft her butt would feel to his face and hands as he circled her butt cheeks and reached around to run his fingers through the thick hair of her bush. How soft those thighs would be when he spread them. Her wet aroma. How her wet pussy would surround and suck his cock into her. How deep he would thrust. How she cried out in pleasure. His penis was fully erect. He licked his dry lips. He popped open a beer.

There was more to this; he had been to this circus many times before. There was location and disposal. Phil would park his van on a hillside fire trail, just outside the state recreational park. They would walk down an easy embankment to a small clearing. Afterwards, he would roll the body down the steep embankment, where the autumn leaves would cover it up and animals would dispose of the remains. The descent was too steep to willingly hike and too high up from the flowing creek below.

He met chicks in bars and elsewhere and got it on with them, but he longed for the classy girls, like this one. One night he observed her dressed in a light linen jacket, light, buttoned blouse, navy blue pencil skirt, pumps, and accessories to go out on the town. This was the woman he had to have. Phil had been in town three months and he ached to do a girl like this again. His van was packed tonight and he would not return.

Her car nosed into the parking space. In the fog shrouded, dim light, Phil could see her long brown hair and retail uniform. She was shapely, pretty, and walked with confidence. She unlocked the door and went inside. The wheel was turning.

Phyllis unlocked the door and entered meekly. Her sister, Louise, looked at her and turned away.

"Hi Lou," said Phyllis. "How are you?"

"What do you think? I'm still furious. How could you, Phyl?"

"I said it was sorry. I didn't mean it. The doctor says I'm sick."

"That's a load of crap and you know it," Louise responded. "I'm sorry, too, but it hurts so much. I have to know right now; will you still be my bride's maid Saturday?"

"Yes Lou."

"The parents are expecting it. I don't know. I don't know. Ben and Ron? Ben. How am I to trust Ben after this? I can see you fucking Ron; he is a hunk. But my fiancé Ben?"

"I told you I'm sorry. I can't do anything to change the past. The doctor says I'm a sex addict. My brain starts undressing every handsome man I see. I can't control it. That's why I'm going away for therapy in two months."

"That's a lot of crap. Let's not talk about it any more, okay?

"Sure," said Phyl gathering a change of wardrobe, "but you said that this morning, too. Look Lou, I'm going out. I think it's better for us."

Phyllis entered the bathroom and removed her clothes. She put on a sexy pair of black panties and then powered her body with baby powder. Next, she put on a low cut bra, which pushed the girls up and together. After donning fresh socks, Phyllis struggled to pull up a tight pair of jeans, which displayed faded seat and thighs. She put on a tightly fitting, country style, long sleeve shirt and she left the top buttons unfastened to show off her charms. Phyllis generously sprayed perfume and fussed with her hair. Lastly, she slipped on cowboy boots and perfectly positioned her cowboy hat, with the sides curled up.

Leaving the bathroom and tossing her worn clothes aside, Phyllis looked to Louise. Louise's expression said it all, "Tramp."

Phyllis answered her look verbally, "I'm going out to get laid. Maybe I'll get fed first." Louise remained speechless. Phyllis locked the door behind her and headed into settling fog of the parking lot. She did not notice the white van parked next to her car with the cargo door adjacent to her driver's door.

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Allan_ArbingerAllan_Arbingerover 13 years agoAuthor
Response to Anonymous and Did I miss the non-consent.

Phil plans to rape and kill Phylis as she represents a middle class woman but Phil is confronted with Phylis for the first time in a different package. He has seconds to decide whether to abduct her or something else.

By posting in this format, I wanted to determine if the average reader here sensed the imminent, heart pounding danger to Phylis or if I had to spell it out.

I'll expand it later, thanks, after current projects are finished.

Thanks for your feedback.

Allan H. Arbinger

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
???

Did I miss the nonconsent?

hindsight2020hindsight2020over 13 years ago
next time

Write a whole story. Or at least a

(Just use your imagination to finish the next four paragraphs of this critique )

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