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- Erotic Poetry
- Unfulfilled
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just calmly expected.
No plunge into
the precipice—
a walk on solid ground
Balmy breezes
cause no shivers
Gentle nudges
rarely lead to a fall.
Promises, whispered
Forgotten, unheeded
Moments unending
lapse into pieces
of a melting blue night
Yet unfulfilled
I welcome the dawn
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Anonymousabout 11 years ago*****
I like this poem, but make these suggestions:
No plunge from
the precipice
(or)
No plunge into
the abyss
(plus)
Whispered promises
(and)
Endless moments
