- Erotic Poetry
- Summer Solstice 1955
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Click hereunder pecan trees, close to the marshland,
a chorus of frogs were singing for sex,
us, embracing, kissing on the plush grass,
joined; doing things you would deny later,
our dresses adorning the split rail fence,
as the day candled down across the fen.
- COMMENTS
buttersover 13 years agois knockout, v.
enjoyed the rest, and how certain words open out when their connotations are examined... like the shape and appearance of the pecan nut, the moisture of the marshlands... the one thing i'd personally quibble over is the punctuation - feels a little cluttered
PoetGuyover 13 years agobecause it is composed completely of very strong images, both visual and aural. He thinks "us" in L3 should be "we" (he thinks it is the subject of the verb "joined" in the following line), but this is a small quibble. He agrees with Angeline that the last line is superb.
Angelineover 13 years agoThis is both evocative and precise, something that I think is a hard balance to achieve in a poem. And that last line is just killer! Really love it.
Esperanza_Hidalgoover 13 years agoI keep tellin you women and frogs are better, gal. Fans self, goes to kiss wifey's sweet >>> (omitted because she may read this).
