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Maria2394
Maria2394
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Somehow the light seems to linger, an
understanding of sorts, between
night and day. By now most blooms have
fallen but she holds onto her petals
longer than she should, wanting to protect them
own them, but she reminds herself that
winter is approaching and flowers will die
even our mothers must pass she sighs and
relinquishes her seeds to the cooling ground.


Maria2394
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Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333almost 11 years ago
Ahhh

I just picked up on the sunflower aspect. This is actually very, very good. I have just become a fan.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333almost 11 years ago
Loved it

Very moving and eloquent.

gi_janetgi_janetabout 12 years ago
63 perfect words

we had an early snowstorm this year - the wind conspired with the snow to snap even the mightiest trees. now - in the dead of winter - the lesser siblings, who suffered worse, are the only remaining still dressed in leaves. nature discards the dead to protect the living. thank you for showing the dying as a protective mother.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ha! I I finally got it

s-u-n-f-l-o-w-e-r/ way cool Maria, sneaking in an acrosstic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
This certainly is…

One in the same struggles that all living organisms must cope with.

Thank you for the privilege of reading your intuitive expression of the evolutionary and emotional connectivity .of nature and the human species… specifically procreation and/or motherhood.

Sincerely,

Jes_da_man

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