Countdown to Green

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Maria2394
Maria2394
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We anticipate the equinox together.

Her whispers seem like echoes
of ninety, sixty, thirty days to go.

The garden understands as she prepares
to blossom and beneath me

She trusts my feet to remember
locations of every bulb and seed.

In a month she will remind me
how much digging is left to do.


Maria2394
Maria2394
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Interesting concept.

Mother Nature has her ways, don't she?

Sincerely,

jes_da_man

PoetGuyPoetGuyabout 13 years ago
An elegant little piece,

understated and plain, which is meant as compliment. Enjoyable.

vrosej10vrosej10about 13 years ago
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Twelve is right but I think it works anyway. This reminds me of a poem I read a while back about a woman on her last legs with cancer but I just can't remember its name.

tigerjentigerjenabout 13 years ago

Makes me think of the upcoming Spring....this Winter has been dreadful weatherwise where I am.....very well done!

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago
Always.....

...enjoy your garden verse. Spring song. Even digging sounds good today.

Tess

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