- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Envoi
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Click hereThe eggshells are long shattered but
I still tiptoe through the house like
the ghost you avoid in the hall
the spectre of might-have-been
hanging from the coat-rack dripping
regret through the floorboards
into the foundations
rotting them.
- COMMENTS
bronzeageabout 13 years agoVery good use of metaphor. I especially like "coat-rack dripping
regret through the floorboards"
Maria2394about 13 years agoand since I have no constructive crit to leave for you, I just wanted to let you know I read it and enjoyed :)
~maria
vrosej10about 13 years agoI like fridayam's version and I am giving this a recommend. This one blew me away. It is powerfully sad and visceral. I keep saying this is my favourite of your stuff so far, but I'm gunna say it again. If I could vote, it's be getting a 6!
