- Illustrated Poetry
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- COMMENTS
MoogPlayerover 8 years agoI thought this poem was quite unique in that it's very different from others that I've read. It also describes almost exactly what I see in my mind when I'm programming my electronic synthesizers and then performing that which I've designed, sequenced and programmed my keyboards to play. Once again great work!
Caligrlalmost 13 years agoOver-zealous electrodes peak, distorting vision.
Nice line...gave this a 5!
fridayamalmost 13 years agoand nice words too--though I would still cut more. Lose "cracked" from l1,
"like a plague" from L2. What do you think, ink? x
Neonuroticalmost 13 years agoVery nice. The image of the ink and the font sets the mood even before poem, which is edgy and thought-provoking.
twelveoonealmost 13 years agoNot a fan of illustrated, rarely read them, A 5, without reservations.
