- Non-Erotic Poetry
- call of myst
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nothing is seen but i hear it coming
they cant see me but they smell me
im looking around slowly because im under water
they smile as they see me
but i cant see them
i can smell them
but the light is not breaking
they arent comming closer
they are watching me...
im turning in my body and they see me
im trying to scream they are watching me
im calling out for help
but they dont care about it
im lost in the mist and they follow
thye come closer and nip
i scream they smile
im crying on my knees
the head hunters comming close
they are biting
they are niping im crying
im screaming
they are still nipping
they are biting me
i am screaming but im silent
i am crying but im dry
im swaying but im held
my body is gone
and im a head thats been collected
in myst where shadows lie
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoHas some serious work that needs to be done, including spelling, proper use of pronoun "I", proper construction of contractions, etc.
